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Home for the Holidays

RDQ:	1860	Max Word/Sent	58	Total Words	3650		Diff Words	1062
Lex	880	Ave Word/.Sent	11	Hi Freq occurs	2694	73.8%	Hi freq	436	41.1%
AR	4.8	Long Sentences	15.7	Low Freq occurs	255	7%	Low freq	192	18.1%

"DEFENSE! DEFENSE, CONCORD, DEFENSE!"
I finish off the cheer with a star jump and a high kick, then fling my maroon-and-white pom-poms skyward, catching them neatly on the way down. As the pep band strikes up "We Will Rock You," I look up in the stands to see if Zach Norton is watching.
He's not.
He's too busy talking to Cassidy Sloane.
Third sees me, though, and waves his trombone from where he's sitting with the rest of the brass section. I wave feebly back.
My friend Ashley swats me with a pom-pom, her dark eyes flashing with mischief. "I didn't know you liked Third," she teases.
Third is actually Cranfield Bartlett III, but nobody ever calls him that, not even his parents.
"Shut up! I do not," I reply, through teeth clenched in a big smile. Ms. O'Donnell, our cheerleading coach, is a stickler for big smiles. "Eyes on the field, girls," she calls to us.
Ashley and I turn around just in time to see Darcy Hawthorne intercept a pass. There's a roar from the stands behind us. it's almost the end of the fourth quarter, and Concord is down by six. We desperately need another touchdown. Along with everybody else on our side of the field, I scream my head off as Darcy runs the ball back down toward our end zone. He makes it almost as far as the center line before Acton manages to tackle him. Music explodes from the pep band, and Coach O'Donnell gives us the signal to launch into another cheer.
"First and ten, do it again! GO, Concord, GO!" we holler, whipping the crowd into a frenzy.
Turkey Day game is always a big deal for Alcott High. Thanksgiving is when we play our archrivals, and across the field, the visitor stands are a mass of blue and gold. For a split second I find myself wishing I was wearing one of Acton High's cheerleading uniforms. I look so much better in blue than I do in maroon.
On the other hand, we get to wear yoga pants instead of the miniskirts the Acton cheerleaders stupidly chose. Not that I have anything against miniskirts, but it's freezing out here. At least they should have opted for fleece leggings under their skirts. Their legs are practically as blue as their uniforms.
I cast a worried glance up at the sky. No sign of snow yet. I really, really hope the weather forecast is wrong. My grandparents are in town from Cleveland for the holiday weekend, and Gram and Gigi, my best friend Megan Wong's grandmother, have promised to take the two of us shopping tomorrow I don't want to miss out because of some dumb snowstorm.
Up in the stands, Megan reaches a purple-gloved hand from underneath the blanket she's sharing with Gigi and Gram and waves at me. I wave back at her, and at my grandfather and my brother Stewart and his girlfriend, Emma Hawthorne.
As much as it grosses me out to admit this, Stewart and Emma are kind of cute together. Well, as cute as two total dorks can be, I guess.
My dad blows me a kiss. I blow him one in return, and he stands up and pretends to catch it and tuck it into his pocket. It's silly and kind of embarrassing, but I don't really mind. For one thing, I'm used to it we've had this little ritual since I was a kid and for another, my dad needs all the love he can get these days. He lost his job a few weeks ago.
The insurance agency he worked for in Boston has been struggling for a while, and they finally had to lay off some employees. My dad was one of them. He's really sad about it because he worked there a long time, and he liked his job. He's worried, too, I can tell. He and my mother haven't said much to my brother and me, aside from asking us not to say anything about it to our friends for now, but we're not stupid. Stewart's a senior in high school, and I'll be getting my driver's license in a few months. We're practically adults.
As for keeping it quiet, how long is it going to take people to figure out what's going on when they spot my dad driving around town with the
PIRATE PETE'S PIZZA sign on the roof of our SUV? Or when they open the door and there he is with their half-pepperoni, half-veggie combo, wearing an eye patch and a Pirate Pete's skull-and-crossbones baseball cap?
I know he took the job to help out our family and everything, but couldn't he have found something less embarrassing? He says it's perfect because it lets him keep his days free for job hunting, but still. Stewart doesn't care, of course, he's oblivious anyway, but I know my mother finds it just as mortifying as I do. Even she couldn't talk him out of it, though.
"Money is money, Calliope," my father told her. "I'm not in a position to be picky right now."
Last night, after we met my grandparents at the airport, I overheard my mother and Gram talking in the kitchen. Mom told her that the layoff couldn't have come at a worse time, what with her finishing up her master's degree in landscape design, and Stewart knee-deep in college applications. If my dad doesn't find a new job soon, something a heck of a lot better than delivering pizzas, she doesn't know how they're going to manage.
Everybody seems to forget that it's scary for me, too, not to mention inconvenient. I'd really been hoping for a car of my own when I get my license, but fat chance of that happening now
There's another roar from our fans, and I snap out of my sulk and automatically slap a smile on my face. Out on the field, Darcy dodges a pair of Acton linemen and sprints toward our goalposts. The linemen grab at his jersey, but he wrenches away and surges forward, crossing
into the end zone and slamming the ball onto the ground. Touchdown!
With less than a minute to go in the game, we're tied with Acton! The crowd hardly needs any encouragement from us, but we do our best anyway as both teams get into position for the goal kick.
Everybody do the Concord rumble, Everybody do the Concord rumble, Everybody rumble!
As Darcy's best friend Kyle Anderson, our kicker, takes his spot on the field, you can practically hear all of Concord hold its breath. The ref's whistle blows and Kyle moves forward, keeping his eye on the goalposts. Then he slams his foot against the ball, sending it flying up toward the gray clouds overhead. Up it soars, up and up and through!
It's a win for Concord!
"Take it home, girls," shouts Coach O'Donnell as our side of the field explodes with excitement. There's nothing forced about the smile on my face now We treat Acton to the traditional Turkey Day gloat, the very same cheer they fired off at us last year when they won:
You might be good at baseball, You might be good at track, But when it comes to football, You might as well step back!
GOBBLE-GOBBLE-GOBBLE-GOBBLE Go, CONCORD!
Fans come pouring down out of the stands, pushing and jostling. Among them I spot Darcy's girlfriend, Jess Delaney. Stuck to her like a tall, skinny barnacle is Kevin Mullins. Kevin just doesn't take a hint. He's had a crush on Jess since we were all at Walden Middle School, and she's just too nice to give him the boot. That's the difference between Jess and me. I don't put up with stuff like that the way she does.
Kevin used to be the smallest kid in the entire school, which was due to the fact that he skipped a bunch of grades. Cassidy calls him the Boy Genius. He shot up this past summer, and now he towers over Jess, who is petite. They probably weigh the same, though. My dad says if Kevin turned sideways and stuck out his tongue, he could pass as a zipper.
"Great job, Becca," Jess tells me. She's wearing a white cable-knit beanie, and only the tail of her thick blond braid is visible. I would kill for hair like Jess's. Mine is blond, too, but it's not thick and wavy like hers.
"Thanks."
She cranes her neck over my shoulder, looking for Darcy. Jess is lucky. Not only is Darcy Hawthorne a great athlete, he's also popular,
smart, and a really nice guy. Plus, he still has a trace of the English accent that he and Emma both brought back with them from their year in England. There's nothing more appealing than a cute guy with an accent.
"Gotta go," Jess says, spotting him. "See you tonight!"
"See you!" I reply. She melts into the crowd, with Kevin trailing behind.
"What's tonight?" asks Ashley.
I make a face. "Book club." Not that I don't like book club, but it is Thanksgiving, after all. I was kind of thinking jammies, leftovers, a nap, maybe snuggling up with some holiday classic on TV My grandmother really, really wanted to attend one of our meetings, though, and tonight was the only night everybody could get together. Cassidy Sloane is in my book club too, and she plays for an elite girls' hockey team. They have some big tournament down in Rhode Island this weekend, and for a while it didn't look like she'd be able to make it to our meeting at all. Which was fine by me, because the less time I spend around Miss Zach-Stealer Sloane these days, the better. But in the end, it turned out she doesn't have to be there until tomorrow morning.
"Wow, what a fabulous game!" says my father, squeezing through the crowd to reach us. The rest of my family is right behind him.
"No kidding," says Gram, draping a blanket around my shoulders. She gives me a hug. "That was a great halftime dance, sweetie."
"Thanks."
"You girls look half-frozen," says Megan's grandmother. "I think there's still some hot chocolate left in my thermos if you'd like some." "Thanks, Mrs. Chen," Ashley replies, "but I promised I'd get right home to help my mom." Call me later, she mouths to me as she turns to go, pretending to hold a cell phone up to her ear. I nod.
"We should head home and help your mother too," says Gram, linking her arm through mine as we inch our way toward the parking lot. Ahead of us, my brother is acting all mushy-gushy over Emma Hawthorne. He has his arm around her and keeps leaning down to kiss the top of her head. Gak! So gross! I hate PDA when it involves my brother.
I glance over at Megan and scrunch up my nose. She smothers a laugh. Megan knows exactly how I feel about this stuff. That's the good thing about best friends. Most of the time you don't have to say a word, and they still totally understand you.
It's not that I don't like Emma, she's okay. It's just, knowing that she's my brother's girlfriend makes things a little weird sometimes. Plus, we probably never would have been friends if it weren't for the book club. Megan's the only one in it I'm really close to. I have almost nothing in common with the others, and I'm still surprised I like them as much as I do.
Which isn't always all that much. For instance, I'm not wild about Cassidy Sloane these days. Ever since school started this year, she's been hanging out with Zach Norton again.
I look over to where the two of them are standing on the sidelines. Cassidy has her camera out and she's taking his picture. Zach is clowning around and laughing his head off over something she's saying. Watching them, it's easy to see that he likes her. You can just tell when a guy is interested in a girl, you know? And it's written all over Zach's face that he likes Cassidy.
Last spring, after he asked me to the Spring Formal, I really, really thought maybe he liked me. After all, I didn't have to pester him or drop hints or anything. He picked up the phone all by himself and called. Would he have done that if he didn't like me?
But now he can't take his eyes off Cassidy Sloane, the red-haired giantess from my Mother-Daughter Book Club.
I just don't get it. Back in eighth grade, when Zach surprised Cassidy with a kiss, she was so disgusted she slugged him with her baseball mitt. After that they didn't talk for a whole summer, so I figured that was that and maybe I'd finally have a chance. Even when they patched things up I was still hopeful, mostly because Cassidy made it very clear they were just friends. Plus, she spent most of last year practically glued to Tristan Berkeley, the snotty but incredibly good-looking English guy whose family did the house-swap with the Hawthornes. Tristan needed an ice-dancing partner, and Cassidy fit the bill.
I swear she has all the luck. These days the only guy who's interested in me is Third. Who is fine and everything, but he's, well, Third. Kind of a moose, dorky smile, even dorkier sense of humor. He's not exactly Prince Charming.
My mother says I spend way too much time thinking about boys, but I can't help it. Boys are the most interesting thing on the planet.
Most boys, that is. Spotting Third lumbering in our direction with his trombone case, I tug my grandmother through an opening in the crowd. "I can't wait to get home," I tell her. "I'm starving."
"I don't know which I'm looking forward to more," she says, trotting
along beside me. "Thanksgiving dinner or the meeting tonight."
Gram was ecstatic when my mother told her she'd get to come to book club. She's hardly stopped talking about it since she got here. My grandmother is the whole reason we're reading what we're reading this fall.
We held our first meeting of the year back in August at Kimball's Farm. Usually, we wait until the end of each year's kick-off meeting to go out for ice cream, it's one of our little rituals, but this year we decided to meet there to celebrate the Hawthornes being home from England. We were just sitting down at a picnic table with our ice cream cones when Jess's mom asked whose turn it was to pick something for us to read.
"I think it's yours," Mrs. Hawthorne told her. Emma's mother is a librarian and super organized, and she's been in charge of the club since the beginning.
"No, Phoebe, I think it's Becca and Calliope's turn," Mrs. Wong said, taking the teeniest lick ever of her strawberry ice cream cone. Megan's mother treats sugar like it's the enemy.
My mother pounced on this the way I pounce on Motor Mouth lip gloss whenever it goes on sale. "That's right! It is. And we've got just the thing."
I looked at her blankly. This was news to me. "We do?"
"Uh-huh," she said, nodding.
"Well?" asked Mrs. Hawthorne.
"The Betsy-Tacy books!"
I let out a groan. This was my mother's idea of "just the thing"? Those books Gram was always going on about? My grandmother gave me the entire set practically the day I was born, and they've been sitting on the bookshelf in my room forever. They were her absolute favorite when she was growing up, which tells you how old they are.
What happened next, though, was probably the high point of my entire three years with the book club.
"What are the Betsy-Tacy books?" asked Emma.
Stunned silence fell over the picnic table. Megan and Jess and Cassidy and I stared at her, our mouths literally dropping open. Emma Hawthorne has read every book in the universe.
"You don't know them?" asked my mother, flicking a glance at Mrs. Hawthorne. "That surprises me, Emma. They're classics, after all." "Really?" Emma frowned.
"Absolutely. They're about a group of girls growing up in a little town in Minnesota called Deep Valley."
"How many books are there in the series?"
"Ten."
I'll never forget the look on Emma's face as long as I live.
"TEN?" she screeched, whirling around to her mother. "How come you never told me about them?"
"Well," said Mrs. Hawthorne, "it's not that I didn't know about them" she flicked a glance back at my mother, and I sensed a little tug-of-war going on," or about the author, Maud Hart Lovelace. I just never got around to reading them."
I could tell that my mother was trying very hard not to gloat. It's almost impossible to one-up Mrs. Hawthorne.
I decided to rub it in. "I've read them," I said, which wasn't exactly true. My mother read the first few aloud to me when I was little, but I never finished the series. Emma didn't need to know that, though. `Ages ago."
From the expression on Emma's face, you'd have thought I just announced that I was growing a tail. "You did? How come you never mentioned them?"
"You never asked," I replied, trying not to look too smug.
Cassidy's mother frowned at me. 'Are you sure you want to read them again?"
Across the picnic table, my mother gave me Winona eyes. Gram made up that expression. Winona Root is a character in the books, and this one time Betsy and Tacy and their friend Tib try to hypnotize her into taking them to the theater. It doesn't work, of course, but it's pretty funny the way they all stare at her, trying.
Winona eyes or no Winona eyes, I knew that if I said no, my mother would never let me hear the end of it. There's just no dealing with my mother. "Sure," I replied. "Why not?"
My mother swiftly closed the deal. "Becca's grandmother has offered to buy a complete set for each of you, if you all agree to read them."
"That's very generous of her," said Mrs. Hawthorne. "She must really love these books."
"She loves Maud Hart Lovelace the way you love Jane Austen, Phoebe," my mother told her. "Mother was born in Minnesota, and she grew up reading the Betsy-Tacy series. She made sure I did too. It's kind of a family tradition."
I shot her a look. Talk about stretching the truth! A family tradition? For her and Gram, maybe, but not for me.
"Can you tell us a bit about the books?" asked Mrs. Delaney. "I'm afraid I'm not familiar with them either."
`Absolutely," my mother replied. "Deep Valley is a small town, very much like Concord, only in the Midwest. The stories follow Betsy Ray and her family and friends as they grow up in the late nineteenth and early twentieth centuries."
Cassidy let out a groan when she heard this, but my mother was ready for her.
"I know, I know, more musty, dusty old books, right? These are different from all the other ones we've read so far, though. They have a very modern sensibility" My mother fished around in her tote bag and pulled out Betsy-Tacy. "This is the first book, and it starts when Betsy Ray and Tacy Kelly are five years old."
"Whoa, dude, I mean, Mrs. Chadwick, are you seriously expecting us to read about a couple of five-year-olds?" Cassidy protested. "We're sophomores!"
"Wait, wait, let me finish," my mother hurried to explain. "The books follow the girls all the way through high school and into college and beyond. See?" She dumped the rest of the books in her tote bag
onto the table and held one of them up, waving it triumphantly. "The last one is called Betsy's Wedding."
The picnic table grew quiet as my friends chewed on that.
"You girls are going to feel right at home in Deep Valley, I promise," my mother continued. "Betsy and her friends are fun-loving, and they like pranks and mischief, and above all   she paused dramatically and lowered her voice "they like boys."
Cassidy snorted. "That clinches it for me," said her mother, elbowing her sharply. "Count me in."
Emma sighed happily. "Ten whole books I haven't read!"
"I don't have time to read ten books," grumbled Cassidy, who looked like she wanted to pop somebody with her ice cream cone. Or better yet, her hockey stick.
"Nonsense," said Mrs. Sloane-Kinkaid. "What about all that time you're spending in the car these days?" She reached over and plucked a handful of books from the table. "One hockey tournament in Connecticut and you'd knock these right off."
"On top of all my homework? Mom, get real! I'm already a week behind on The Grapes of Wrath." Cassidy crossed her arms and scowled.
"I thought we were going to get to pick the books this year for a change," said Jess softly, looking disappointed. She'd been pushing for some story about a racehorse. Jess still had that stupid horse crush of hers. I got over mine back in fourth grade.
"I thought so too," said Emma. "I want us all to read Jane Eyre." "How about a compromise?" suggested Mrs. Wong. "What if we
split the year up this time, and spend the first half, between now and the end of December, say, reading the Betsy-Tacy books, then move on to something else after that?"

Subjective Criteria

Illustrations: No support

Dialog: Multiple speakers

Dialog: Broken dialogue

Dialog: Unlabeled Speaker

Vocabulary: Some difficult words

Language: Many descriptive words

Sentences: Many Long Complex

Text structure: Story/Poem

Inferences: Some implications

Complexity: Several unrelated ideas

Concepts: Concrete/Simple Social

Chapters

Author's purpose: Obvious

Features

Clear cause/effect

Simple Plot

First Person

Topic

Sports

Challenges

*Family & Friends

Reading

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