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Cam Jansen: The Ghostly Mystery #16

RDQ:	716	Max Word/Sent	21	Total Words	2403		Diff Words	510
Lex	680	Ave Word/.Sent	7	Hi Freq occurs	1663	69.2%	Hi freq	235	46.1%
AR	3.1	Long Sentences	0.3	Low Freq occurs	71	3%	Low freq	35	6.9%

Chapter One
Look at him," Cam Jansen said. She pointed to someone wearing a costume with three horns. "He looks like a triceratops."
Eric pointed to someone else and said, "And look at her. She looks like Tyrannosaurus rex."
Cam Jansen, her friend Eric Shelton, and	 Cam's aunt Molly were waiting in line. They wanted to buy tickets to a Triceratops Pops concert. Triceratops Pops is a singing group. They wear dinosaur costumes when they per-
form. Sometimes their fans wear costumes, too.
"I went to a concert in London," Aunt Molly said. "Someone there was dressed in a piano and he played a tuxedo."
Cam looked at Eric. Then they both looked at Aunt Molly.
Aunt Molly laughed. "Oh, my. I said that wrong. The man was dressed in a tuxedo and he played a piano."
Aunt Molly thought a moment. "And it wasn't in London. It was in Paris."
Cam stepped out of line. She looked at all the people ahead of her. They were all waiting to buy tickets.
"I hope there are still tickets left for us," Cam said.
The man standing behind Cam smiled and asked, "Excuse me, but isn't this a long line for a science talk?"
The man was wearing a dark suit and tie. He was carrying a large leather briefcase.
"This isn't for a science talk," Eric told the man. "We're waiting to buy concert tickets." "Oh, no," the man in the suit said. "My children asked me to get them tickets for a talk about dinosaurs." The man took a piece of paper from his pocket and looked at it. "They asked me to come here and get tickets for a talk about the triceratops."
"This is a concert hall, and Triceratops Pops is a singing group," Eric explained. "Some people call them T -Pops. They're very good."
A tall teenager standing behind the man said, "The T Pops singers are into science, too. They are masters of the `science of sound. "'
Aunt Molly pointed to a woman walking by. The woman had green and purple hair. Aunt Molly whispered, "She looks strange." "I think she looks nice," the tall teenager said.
Cam looked at the woman with the green
and purple hair. Cam blinked her eyes and said, "Click. She looks interesting. I want to remember her."
Cam Jansen has a photographic memory. It's as if she has a mental camera and there are photographs in her head of everything
she has seen. Cam says "Click" is the sound her mental camera makes when it takes a picture.
Cam's real name is Jennifer Jansen. But when people found out about her mental camera, they began calling her "The Camera." Soon "The Camera" was shortened to "Cam."
Cam closed her eyes. She said, "Click," again.
"We've seen lots of interesting people in the city," Cam said, with her eyes still closed. "Right now I'm looking at a picture I have in my head of a man Eric and I saw. The man was carrying lots of signs. He even had words painted on his clothing."
"I remember one of the signs," Eric said. "`Air is free! Water is free! Food should be free, too! "'
Cam said, "Click," again.
"Now I'm looking at a picture I have in my head of the Bell Woman."
"She had bell earrings," Eric told Aunt Molly, "and bells on her necklace and her bracelet, too. When she walked, she jingled."
Just then a ghost jumped in front of Aunt Molly.
"Eek!"Aunt Molly screamed. "Oh, my!"
Chapter Two Cam opened her eyes.
Someone wearing a ghost costume was standing in front of Aunt Molly. The "ghost" was wearing a large white sheet, black gloves, and a scary gray mask. He waved his arms and shouted, "Boo!"
Cam looked at the ghost, blinked her eyes, and said, "Click. "
Aunt Molly put her hand to her heart. She held on to Eric and said, "Oh, my."
Eric whispered, "It's not a real ghost."
Eric pointed and said, "He's wearing sneakers. Real ghosts don't wear sneakers."
The ghost waved his arms and shouted, "Boo!" again. Then he jumped in front of someone else.
"What a curious thing to do," the man in the suit said. "This dinosaur singing group seems to attract odd fans."
"Excuse me," Cam said, "but I'm not odd."
"Someone should stop that ghost," Eric said. "He's scaring lots of people."
The ghost yelled, "Boo!" and waved his arms at a group of teenagers. They yelled, "Boo!" and waved their arms back at him.
Then the ghost held up his arms and ran in circles around a small boy and his mother. When the ghost yelled, "Boo!" the boy grabbed onto his mother and cried.
"Scaring young children is not funny," Aunt Molly said.
"That's an evil ghost," the man in the suit said.
"Hey, you!" a security guard from the back of the line called out. "Stop that!"
The guard was hurrying toward the ghost. Another guard was running from the front of the line.
They chased the ghost away from the line and into the train station. The entrance to the station was just past the end of the line.
Lots of people were leaving the train station. They hurried past the ghost. Some smiled when they saw his costume.
The ghost walked up to a short old man wearing a bright yellow shirt. The man was bent slightly forward. He was holding papers and magazines to his chest. He didn't seem to notice the ghost.
"Oh, no!" Aunt Molly said. "I hope he doesn't scare that old man."
But that's just what the ghost did.
The ghost jumped in front of him. The ghost waved his arms and yelled, "Boo!"
The old man looked up and saw the ghost. The old man opened his mouth as if he was about to scream. But he didn't. His hands fell to his sides. His papers and magazines scattered. The man clutched his heart and dropped to the ground.
Chapter Three
The old man's arms and legs were stretched out. His glasses had fallen off. His newspapers and magazines were on the ground.
The guards and a few people from the line ran to the man. A teenaged girl was the first to get to him. She shook the man and said, "Getup! Getup!"
The man didn't move.
"I knew it!" Aunt Molly said. "He was so scared that he had a heart attack."
The ghost turned. He looked at the guards and the people. Then he ran off.
One of the guards and two teenagers chased after the ghost. But then the old man opened his eyes.
He moaned. "Oh! Oh! Help!"
The guard and the teenagers turned. They ran to the man.
The old man put his hand to his heart. He closed his eyes.
"I'll call for an ambulance," one guard told the other. "You stay here."
The guard took a small telephone from his pocket. He spoke into it. He said there was an emergency. He spoke about the old man and gave his location.
"Step back," the other guard said. "Give him air."
`Just a minute," the guard talking into the telephone said. He hurried to the old man. He bent close to the man's face and listened.
Cam whispered to Eric, "He's checking if the man is breathing."
Then the guard picked up the man's hand. "Now he's checking the man's pulse," Cam said.
The guard spoke into the telephone again. "He's breathing. His pulse is steady."
The guard held the telephone close to his ear for another minute and listened. Then he put the telephone in his pocket.
The other guard called out, "Is there a doctor here?"
"I'm a baker," someone said.
"I'm a teacher."
"I run a large business," the man in the suit said. "We sell cloth to stores all over the world."
"This man needs a doctor, not someone who sells cloth," the guard said.
"My cousin is a doctor," one woman said, "and I know what to do. Raise the man's head."
"No. Raise his feet," someone else said. "Breathe into his mouth."
"No. Just leave him alone."
The guard looked at the old man. The old man took a deep breath. He opened his eyes. He looked at the guard and the crowd. He took another deep breath and closed his eyes again.
"Look," Cam whispered. She pointed at the old man's hair. "He's wearing a wig. When he fell his hair moved. He has brown hair under a white wig."

Sirens were blaring. They were getting louder. An ambulance drove up and stopped near where Cam, Eric, and Aunt Molly were standing.
Two emergency medical people, a young man and a young woman, got out of the ambulance. They took out a stretcher and hurried to the old man.
"What happened here?" the young man from the ambulance asked.
"He fell," someone said. "He was scared and he fell."
"Someone dressed as a ghost jumped in front of him and yelled, 'Boo!"'
"He had a heart attack," Aunt Molly said. "Are you sure he had a heart attack? Are you a doctor?" the young man asked Aunt Molly.
"No. I work for an airline. I help people plan their vacations."
The young man told his partner, "He may have just fainted. But we should take him to the emergency room for a full checkup."
The old man opened his eyes and looked at the stretcher and ambulance. Then he spoke very softly.
"What did you say?" the young woman asked.
She told everyone to be quiet. Then she bent close to the old man.
The old man spoke again.
"I still can't hear you," the young woman said. "Could you speak louder?"
Suddenly someone shouted, "Help! Help! I've been robbed!"
Chapter Four
The shouts came from the front of the line. Cam turned. Eric and the others standing around the old man turned, too.
"I've been robbed! I've been robbed!" a woman said as she walked quickly toward the two guards.
The guards walked to the woman. They knew her.
"Sally, what happened?" one of the guard asked.
"I was sitting in the ticket booth," Sally said "And someone pointed a gun at me."
Sally wiped a tear from her cheek. "It was awful," she said.
"What happened next?" a guard asked. Sally took a deep breath and said, "He waved the gun and said, `Give me all the money.
Sally wiped away another tear.
"So I gave him everything in the cash box. I sold a lot of tickets this morning. I know there was a lot of money in that box.
"`Now give me your money,' he said.
"My purse was by the desk. I emptied it. He took my lunch money. He took the money for the train ride home. He took everything."
One guard took the telephone from his pocket. He called the police and told them that there had been a robbery.
The other guard asked Sally, "Can you describe the thief?"
"He was about my height," Sally said. "And he was wearing sneakers. I know that. But I never saw his face. He was wearing a ghost costume."
"That ghost scared that poor old man, too," someone said.
The old man was standing up now. He was listening to Sally.
"And he scared my child," a woman said. The guards walked with Sally to the ticket booth. Many of the people who had been listening walked back to the line.
Eric whispered, "That ghost sure made a lot of trouble."
Aunt Molly said, "I never liked ghosts." Eric and Aunt Molly walked to their place in line. Cam didn't. She was still watching the old man.
The emergency medical people were holding the stretcher.
"I won't get on that," the old man said. "There's nothing wrong with me."
Cam looked at the old man. She blinked her eyes and said, "Click. "

Sirens were blaring again. A police car drove up to the ticket booth. Two police officers got out of the car.
"Come on," Eric said to Cam. He was on his way to the ticket booth.
Cam didn't follow Eric. She watched the old man.
The young woman told the man, "You don't have to get on the stretcher. But you must come with us to the hospital. You need to let a doctor take a look at you."
"I'm not going to the hospital," the man said as he stood. "I don't need a doctor to poke at me and tell me what I already know. There's nothing wrong with me."
The man started to walk away. The young woman reached for his arm.
"Let me help you," she said.
"Leave me alone," the old man told her.
Then he walked toward the train station. The emergency medical people watched the man leave. Then the young woman shook her head. She and the young man put the stretcher in the ambulance and drove off. Cam walked to where the old man had been lying. Cam looked at the glasses, papers, and magazines the man had left behind. She closed her eyes and said, "Click. "
Cam picked up the glasses. She looked through them and then put them in her pocket.
Eric ran to Cam.
"The police went to the train station. They're looking for the ghost," Eric said quickly.
Eric took a deep breath.
"With that costume on, he'll be easy to find," Eric said.
He took another deep breath.
"Eric," Cam said slowly. "He'll take off the
ghost costume. That was the plan. Then it will be very hard to find him."
Eric scratched his head and said, "You're right."
"If the police want to catch the thieves," Cam said, "they should come with me. I'll be looking for the old man."
Chapter Five
"The old man?" Eric asked. "Why are you following him? He didn't do anything."
(am said, "I think he did. I think he and the ghost are partners. They're both thieves." Cam was walking quickly toward the train station. Eric had to run to keep up.
Many people were leaving the train station. They all seemed to be in a hurry. Cam and Eric. were going the other way. It was difficult for them to get through the crowd.
"The old man had a heart attack. He almost died," Eric said.

Subjective Criteria

Illustrations: Little support

Dialog: Multiple speakers

Dialog: Broken dialogue

Vocabulary: More decoding/definition issues

Language: Many descriptive words

Sentences: Multiple phrases

Text structure: Story/Poem

Inferences: Some implications

Concepts: Concrete/Simple Social

Chapters

Features

Character traits

Simple Plot

Topic

Stealing

Problem Solving

Low Frequency Words

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emergency	emptied	getup	height	location
magazines	medical	necklace	paris	partner
partners	photographic	photographs	pulse	purse
robbery	scaring	science	security	shelton
shortened	sirens	stretcher	teenaged	teenagers
thieves	triceratops	tuxedo	tyrannosaurus	vacations