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Tales of a Fourth Grade Nothing

RDQ:	624	Max Word/Sent	30	Total Words	2411		Diff Words	667
Lex	660	Ave Word/.Sent	7	Hi Freq occurs	1782	73.9%	Hi freq	305	45.7%
AR	3.0	Long Sentences	2.1	Low Freq occurs	44	1.8%	Low freq	38	5.7%

The Big Winner
I won Dribble at Jimmy Fargo's birthday party. All the other guys got to take home goldfish in little plastic bags. I won him because I guessed there were three hundred and forty-eight jelly beans in Mrs. Fargo's jar. Really there were four hundred and twenty-three she told us later. Still my guess was closest. "Peter Warren Hatcher is the big winner!" Mrs. Fargo announced.
At first I felt bad that I didn't get a goldfish too. Then Jimmy handed me a glass bowl. Inside there was some water and three rocks. A tiny green turtle was sleeping on the biggest rock. All the other guys looked at their goldfish. I knew what they were thinking. They wished they could have tiny green turtles too.
I named my turtle Dribble while I was walking home from Jimmy's party. I live at 25 West 68th Street. It's an old apartment building. But it's got one]]
of the best elevators in New York City. There are mirrors all around. You can see yourself from every angle. There's a soft cushioned bench to sit on if you're too tired to stand. The elevator operator's name is Henry Bevelheimer. He lets us call him Henry because Bevelheimer's very hard to say.
Our apartment's on the twelfth floor. But I don't have to tell Henry. He already knows. He knows everybody in the building. He's that smart! He even knows I'm nine and in fourth grade.
I showed him Dribble right away. "I won him at a birthday party" I said.
Henry smiled. "Your mother's going to be surprised."
Henry was right. My mother was really surprised. Her mouth opened when I said "Just look at what I won at Jimmy Fargo's birthday party. " I held up my tiny green turtle. "I've already named him . Dribble! Isn't that a great name for a turtle?"
My mother made a face. "I don't like the way he smells" she said.
"What do you mean?" I asked. I put my nose right down close to him. I didn't smell anything but turtle. So Dribble smells like turtle I thought. Well he's supposed to. That's what he is!
"And I'm not going to take care of him either" my mother added.
"Of course you're not" I told her. "He's my turtle.]]
And I'm the one who's going to take care of him." "You're going to change his water and clean out his bowl and feed him and all of that?" she asked. "Yes" I said. "And even more. I'm going to see to it that he's happy!"' This time my mother made a funny noise. Like a groan.
I went into my bedroom. I put Dribble on top of my dresser. I tried to pet him and tell him he would be happy living with me. But it isn't easy to pet a turtle. They aren't soft and furry and they don't lick you or anything. Still I had my very own pet at last.
Later when I sat down at the dinner table my mother said "I smell turtle. Peter go and scrub your hands!"
Some people might think that my mother is my biggest problem. She doesn't like turtles and she's always telling me to scrub my hands. That doesn't mean just run them under the water. Scrub means I'm supposed to use soap and rub my hands together. Then I've got to rinse and dry them. I ought to know by now. I've heard it enough!
But my mother isn't my biggest problem. Neither is my father. He spends a lot of time watching commercials on TV. That's because he's in the advertising business. These days his favorite commercial is the one about Juicy-O. He wrote it himself. And the president of the Juicy-O company liked it so much he]]
sent my father a whole crate of Juicy-O for our family to drink. It tastes like a combination of oranges pineapples grapefruits pears and bananas. (And if you want to know the truth I'm getting pretty sick of drinking it.) But Juicy-O isn't my biggest problem either.
My biggest problem is my brother Farley Drexel Hatcher. He's two-and-a-half years old. Everybody calls him Fudge. I feel sorry for him if he's going to grow up with a name like Fudge but I don't say a word. It's none of my business.
Fudge is always in my way. He messes up everything he sees. And when he gets mad he throws himself flat on the floor and he screams. And he kicks.And he bangs his fists. The only time I really like. him is when he's sleeping. He sucks four fingers on his left hand and makes a slurping noise.
When Fudge saw Dribble he said "Ohhhh . . . see!"
And I said "That's my turtle get it? Mine! You don't touch him."
Fudge said "No touch." Then he laughed like crazy.]]
Mr. and Mrs. Juicy-0
One night my father came home from the office all excited. He told us Mr. and Mrs. Yarby were coming to New York. He's the president of the Juicy-O company. He lives in Chicago. I wondered if he'd bring my father another crate of juicy-0. If he did I'd probably be drinking it for the rest of my life. Just thinking about it was enough to make my stomach hurt.
My father said he invited Mr. and Mrs. Yarby to stay with us. My mother wanted to know why they couldn't stay at a hotel like most people who come to New York. My father said they could. But he didn't want them to. He thought they'd be more comfortable staying with us. My mother said that was about the silliest thing she'd ever heard.
But she fixed up Fudge's bedroom for our guests. She put fancy sheets and a brand-new blanket on the]]
hide-a-bed. That's a sofa that opens up into a bed at night. It's in Fudge's room because that used to be our den. Before he was born we watched TV in there. And lots of times Grandma slept over on the hide-abed. Now we watch TV right in the living room. And Grandma doesn't sleep over very often.
My mother moved Fudge's crib into my room. He's going to get a regular bed when he's three my mother says. There are a lot of reasons I don't like to sleep in the same room as Fudge. I found that out two months ago when my bedroom was being painted I had to sleep in Fudge's room for three nights because the paint smell made me cough. For one thing he  talks in his sleep. And if a person didn't know better a person could get scared. Another thing is that slurping noise he makes. It's true that I like to hear it when I'm awake but when I'm trying to fall asleep I like things very quiet.
When I complained about having to sleep with Fudge my mother said "It's just for two nights Peter:" "I'll sleep in the living room" I suggested. "On the sofa . . . or even a chair."
"No" my mother said. "You will sleep in your bedroom. In your own bed!"
There was no point in arguing. Mom wasn't going to change her mind.
She spent the day in the kitchen. She really cooked up a storm. She used so many pots and pans Fudge]]
didn't have any left to bang together. And that's one of his favorite pastimes-banging pots and pans together. A person can get an awful headache listening to that racket.
Right after lunch my mother opened up the dinner table. We don't have a separate dining room. When we have company for dinner we eat in one end of the living room. When Mom finished setting the table she put a silver bowl filled with flowers right in the middle. I said "Hey Mom . . . it looks like you're expecting the President or something."
"Very funny Peter!" my mother answered. Sometimes my mother laughs like crazy at my jokes. Other times she pretends not to get them. And then there are times when I know she gets them but she doesn't seem to like them. This was one of those times. So I decided no more jokes until after dinner.
I went to Jimmy Fargo's for the afternoon. I came home at four o'clock. I found my mother standing over the dinner table mumbling. Fudge was on the floor playing with my father's socks. I'm not sure why he likes socks so much but if you give him a few pairs he'll play quietly for an hour.
I said "Hi Mom. I'm home."
"I'm missing two flowers" my mother said.
I don't know how she noticed that two flowers were missing from her silver bowl. Because there were at least a dozen of them left. But sure enough when I]]
checked I saw two stems with nothing on them. "Don't look at me Mom" I said. "What would I do with two measly flowers?"
So we both looked at Fudge. "Did you take Mommy's pretty flowers?" my mother asked him. "No take" Fudge said. He was chewing on something.
"What's in your mouth?" my mother asked. Fudge didn't answer.
"Show Mommy!"
"No show" Fudge said.
"Oh yes)" My mother picked him up and forced his mouth open. She fished out a rose petal.
"What did you do with Mommy's flowers?" She raised her voice. She was really getting upset. Fudge laughed.
"Tell Mommy!"
"Yum!" Fudge said. "Yummy yummy yummy!" "Oh no!" my mother cried rushing to the telephone. She called Dr. Cone. She told him that Fudge ate
two flowers. Dr. Cone must have asked what kind because my mother said "Roses I think. But I can't be sure. One might have been a daisy."
There was a long pause while my mother listened to whatever Dr. Cone had to say. Then Mom said "Thank you Dr. Cone." She hung up.
"No more flowers!" she told Fudge. "You understand?"]]
"No more" Fudge repeated. "No more ... no more ... no more."
My mother gave him a spoonful of peppermint flavored medicine. The kind I take when I have stomach pains. Then she carried Fudge off to have his bath.
Leave it to my brother to eat flowers! I wondered how they tasted. Maybe they're delicious and I don't know it because I've never tasted one; I thought. I decided to find out. I picked off one petal from a pink rose. I put it in my mouth and tried to chew it up. But I couldn't do it. It tasted awful. I spit it out in the garbage. Well at least now I knew I wasn't missing anything great!
Fudge ate his supper in the kitchen before our company arrived. While he was eating I heard my mother remind him "Fudgie's going to be a good boy tonight. Very good for Daddy's friends."
"Good" Fudge said. "Good boy." "That's right)" my mother told him.
I changed and scrubbed up while Fudge finished his supper. I was going to eat with the company. Being nine has its advantages)
My mother was all dressed up by the time my father got home with the Yarbys. You'd never have guessed that Mom spent most of the day in the kitchen. You'd also never have guessed that Fudge ate two flowers.]]
He was feeling fine. He even smelled nice-like baby powder.
Mrs. Yarby picked him up right away. I knew she would. She looked like a grandmother. That type always makes a big deal out of Fudge. She walked into the living room cuddling him. Then she sat down on the sofa and bounced Fudge around on her lap.
"Isn't he the cutest little boy!" Mrs. Yarby said. "I just love babies." She gave him a big kiss on the top of his head. I kept waiting for somebody to tell her Fudge was no baby. But no one did.
My father carried the Yarbys' suitcase into Fudge's room. When he came back he introduced me to our company.
"This is our older son Peter" he said to the Yarbys. "I'm nine and in fourth grade" I -told them. "How do Peter" Mr. Yarby said.
Mrs. Yarby just gave me a nod. She was still busy with Fudge. "I have a surprise for this dear little boy!" she said. "It's in my suitcase. Should I go get it?"
"Yes" Fudge shouted. "Go get . . . go get!"
Mrs. Yarby laughed as if that was the best joke she ever heard. "I'll be right back" she told Fudge.  She put him down and ran off to find her suitcase.
She came back carrying a present tied up with a red ribbon.
"Ohhhh!" Fudge cried opening his eyes wide. "Goody!" He clapped his hands.]]
Mrs. Yarby helped him unwrap his surprise. It was a windup train that made a -lot of noise. Every time it bumped into something it turned around and went the other way. Fudge liked it a lot. He likes anything that's noisy.
I said "That's a nice train."
Mrs. Yarby turned to me. "Oh I have something for you too uh . . . uh. . . ."
"Peter" I reminded her. "My name is Peter." "Yes. Well I'll go get it."
Mrs. Yarby left the room again. This time she came back with a flat package. It was wrapped up too - red ribbon and all. She handed it to me. Fudge stopped playing with his train long enough to come over and see what I got. I took off the paper very carefully in case my mother wanted to save it. And also to show Mrs. Yarby that I'm a lot more careful about things than my brother. I'm not sure she noticed. My present turned out to be a big picture dictionary. The kind I liked when I was about four years old. My old one is in Fudge's bookcase now.
"I don't know much about big boys" Mrs. Yarby said. "So the lady in the store said a nice book would be a good idea."
A nice book would have been a good idea I thought. But a picture dictionary! That's for babies! I've had my own regular dictionary since I was eight. But I knew I had to be polite so I said "Thank you very much. It's just what I've always wanted."]]

Subjective Criteria

Illustrations: Some support

Vocabulary: More decoding/definition issues

Language: Few descriptive words

Sentences: Multiple phrases

Text structure: Blend of written/oral

Inferences: Some implications

Concepts: Concrete/Simple Social

Chapters

Features

Character development

Simple problem/solution

Topic

Brothers

*Family & Friends

Low Frequency Words

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