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Zack's Alligator

RDQ:	465	Max Word/Sent	19	Total Words	1229		Diff Words	387
Lex	630	Ave Word/.Sent	5	Hi Freq occurs	763	62.1%	Hi freq	164	42.4%
AR	2.6	Long Sentences	0	Low Freq occurs	39	3.2%	Low freq	25	6.5%

A big box came in the mail for Zack. 
It was from Zack's uncle Jim in Florida. Zack shook the box. What could it be? he wondered. He untied the bow and ripped off the paper. There was another box inside. Zack lifted the lid. Inside was an alligator key chain with a note from Uncle Jim. It said Dear Zack Here is a present for you. Have fun! Love Your Uncle Jim P.S. Water Bridget 
Zack held up the key chain. "This must be Bridget" he said. Zack put Bridget in the sink and turned on the faucet. Bridget began to move - her head turned her tail curled. Bridget grew bigger and bigger. Soon she filled the sink. Zack moved Bridget to the tub and turned on the shower. Bridget stretched and sighed. "That feels so good!" she said. Zack watched. Bridget grew larger and larger. She grew out of the tub and over the side. Bridget moaned and groaned and whipped her tail. She splashed water everywhere. "What is going on in there?" called Zack's mother. "I am watering the alligator" said Zack. "Alligator! What alligator?" "The one Uncle Jim sent" Zack said. He heard his mother laugh. "I see" she said. "Well clean up when you are done." "I will" said Zack. Bridget crawled out of the tub and onto the floor. "I am hungry" she said. "Do you have any fish?" "I don't know" said Zack. "Let's go see." Bridget followed Zack down the stairs and into the kitchen. Zack opened the refrigerator door. "No fish?" said Bridget. "No" said Zack. "No fish. But here is some meat loaf. I can fix you a Meat Loaf Special!" "What is that?" asked Bridget. "A surprise" said Zack. "I love surprises!" said Bridget. Bridget went into the living room and stretched out on the sofa. The sofa shook. Bridget looked at the TV. "What a funny-looking box!" she said. Then she hollered to Zack "Hurry up with the food!" "I am coming!" said Zack. He was making his Meat Loaf Special - meat loaf peanut butter mustard banana and a couple of pickles. "Zack what are you doing?" asked his mother. "I am fixing some meat loaf for Bridget." "Who is Bridget?" "The alligator" said Zack. "Oh of course" said Mother. "Well save some for dinner." "I will" said Zack. Bridget ate every bite of Zack's Meat Loaf Special. "Delicious!" she said. "I have never eaten anything like that before. Back home in the Glades I eat mostly fish and snakes and slugs." Suddenly Bridget jumped up from the sofa. "Time for a walk" she said. Bridget wobbled to the door. Zack followed. Bridget's long tail knocked over a chair and some books off a table. Zack picked up the chair and the books. "We are going out Mom" he called. "We?" she asked. "Oh yes you and Bridget. I forgot. Well don't be too long. Dad will be home soon." Outside Bridget was wrestling with the garden hose. "I will get you!" she growled. She gave the hose a big bite. Water squirted everywhere. Zack ran to turn off the water. "That snake will not bother anyone ever again!" said Bridget. Zack sighed and shook his head. Bridget took off down the sidewalk. Zack followed. Just then the mailman pulled up in his truck. "What is that?" cried Bridget. Before Zack could answer Bridget attacked! She bit the tire of the truck. Air hissed out. "Dogs are bad enough" shouted the mailman "but I cannot handle this. No sir! Not alligators!" The mailman jumped into his truck and drove away with a flat tire. Klump! Klump! Klump! Bridget shook her head. "I am glad we don't have those in the Glades" she said. Zack tried to say something but Bridget was off again. They came to the park. Bridget wanted to swing. After that she climbed the monkey bars. Then she jumped on the seesaw. Zack had never seen anyone seesaw by herself. Next Bridget ran to the merry-go-round. Round and round she went. Bridget began to sing. "Oh I am a gator from the Glades and I can do anything - and I mean anything." Bridget go so dizzy she fell off the merry go round. Zack helped Bridget up. Just then his best friend Turk rode up on his bicycle. "Hey Zack!" said Turk. "Where did you get that alligator?" "From my uncle Jim" said Zack. "Some uncle!" Turk said. Suddenly Bridget shouted "What's that fuzzy-wuzzy?" The woman took one look at Bridget and picked up her dog. "Come on Poopsie" she said. "Let Mama take you home." Bridget did a cartwheel. "Who would want that fuzzy-wuzzy anyway?" she said. "I am thirsty not hungry." Bridget did a quick one-two and hop-skipped to the fountain. She drank big gulps of water. Zack and Turk watched. "Will you bring Bridget to school?" asked Turk. "I don't know" said Zack. A policeman came over. "You need a leash on that alligator" he said. "There is a law you know!" "Yes sir" said Zack. The policeman frowned. "Well keep him under control." "Him?" cried Bridget. "Well I bet his pardon! How rude! Hasn't he ever seen a girl gator before?" "You should bring her to school" said Turk. "Maybe" said Zack. Zack and Turk rode Bridget around the park. Suddenly Bridget started to shrink. "I need more water" she said. Zack and Turk helped her to the fountain. Bridget slurped the cool water. "This place is too dry" she said. "In the Glades there is plenty of water and moss and tall grass." "What are the Glades?" asked Turk. "The Everglades" said Zack. "They are in Florida where my uncle Jim lives." "Do you think he could send me an alligator?" asked Turk. "I don't know" said Zack. "I will ask him." "That would be great!" said Turk. "We have to go now" said Zack. "Don't forget to bring Bridget to school!" yelled Turk. "Oh please!" Bridget said to Zack. "I want to see what school is like!" "We will see" said Zack. On the way home Bridget was shrinking more and more. She looked up at Zack with big shiny alligator eyes. "Will you water me again?" she asked. "I will water you every day" said Zack. "Good!" said Bridget. Bridget was getting smaller and smaller. She bobbed her head up and down and began singing. "I am a gator from the Glades and I like to have fun every day. Oh yeah!" When they got home Bridget was key chain size. Zack put her safely in his pocket. "Hello" said Zack's father. "Your mother said you were out with the alligator. May I see it?" "Yes sir" said Zack. Zack pulled ou the key chain with a small alligator hanging from it. "That's very nice" said his father. "Now go wash up for dinner." Zack went upstairs to his room. He could hear his mother tell his father they would have chicken for dinner instead of meat loaf. "Are you all right?" whispered Zack. "Never better" Bridget said. She yawned. "Don't forget to water me tomorrow." "I won't" said Zack. Zack put Bridget back in his pocket. "Zack!" called Mother. "Dinner is ready." "I am coming!" Zack called back. Zack felt Bridget move. He patted his pocket and smiled.]]

Subjective Criteria

Illustrations: Some support

Dialog: Two speakers

Dialog: Broken dialogue

Vocabulary: More decoding/definition issues

Language: Simple language

Sentences: Simple phrases

Text structure: Blend of written/oral

Concept: Fanciful

Features

Simple Plot

Topic

Size

Changes

Growth/Growing

Reptiles

Gifts

*Feelings, Behaviors

Pets

Low Frequency Words

cartwheel	curled	delicious	everglades	faucet
gator	glades	gulps	hollered	klump
mustard	pardon	refrigerator	rude	seesaw
shower	shrink	shrinking	slurped	turk
whipped	wobbled	wrestling	wuzzy	yawned